So yea, Jenna I'm totally copying you. I need to start working on like a billion things, one of them is writing a blog post everyday. I'm sure I'll have days where it's like one word or totally pointless shit, but I need to start setting goals and completing them. So here goes, starting today, for 30 days. Atleast one post a day. And if I make it, I might continue my goal.
Stage fades slowly to black
It's over now
We hope you enjoyed the show
Next, curtains close
Sliding together at an agonizing pace
Your eyes
They're all I see
As curtains close
And dancers leave
Silent eyes, staring
Right back at me
Bittersweet departures crash over me
Goodbye rests on my tongue
Like a burning aftertaste
Can't let go just yet
Wishing to savor what it had
First hinted at
But that is gone
All that's left is
A twisted show
Over now
An empty stage
Cleared out seats
And those eyes
Speaking so unclearly to me
It just might be
Time to say
Goodbye
And let my words flow once more
I've decided it's time to say goodbye. I'm closing the doors, and letting go. It's time to start fighting. I'm going to fight, and I refuse to give in. No matter what you say. Sorry, sweetheart. This time it's up to me, not you. So kiss me goodbye, cause now I'm gone.
Yea as always, this is in reference to like 8 things and people. Hahaha. Well I'm going wedding dress shopping, so psyched! Peace out home skillet biscuit.
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"Peace out home skillet biscuit." What a wonderful way to end your first blog of 30. This is going to be fun to read =]
ReplyDeleteOh, and I liked the poem, but the subject was a bit confusing, because I can sense there's a million different things it's about. (Mine are always like that too, but sometimes you have to work on getting JUST one emotion/thought at a time, you know?) Hey! You told me to critique, so there's my two cents!
Love you Jaime!
I know right? Haha, and yea there are. And thank you much! I like hearing people's thoughts.
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