Wednesday, August 18, 2010

Darkness seeping in
Hazel eyes useless now
Can't seem to find you
Maybe hearing you
But where are you now?
Too dark
For these eyes to find
Your light

Fallen angels forced to say goodbye
To hazel eyes
That failed this time
Riding out on waves of
Consciousness
Blind

Broken martyrs forced to say goodbye
To hazel eyes that failed this time
Riding out on waves of
Sacrifice
Blind

Blessed friends forced to say goodbye
To hazel eyes that failed this time
Riding out on waves of
Love
Blind

Ignorant enemies forced to say goodbye
To hazel eyes that failed this time
Riding out on waves of
Hate
Blind

I like the original idea behind this, but then i tried to take a different path and it didn't turn out as good. Oh well. By the way the original idea started with the second stanza then going somewhere else. But this is what came out instead. Sometimes I think words write themselves.

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