Wednesday, June 2, 2010

This City Is Far From Here

So, whoever guesses who this poem is about will win a cookie ;D


Fell through the bottom, trapped in the nightmare
She is searching for the truth of this world
Mischevious creatures make her eyes stare
Her reality is coming unfurled

Much more than a child, no less than mundane
Lost and left behind, innocent no more
Somewhat strange, maybe a little insane
Bloodied now from the flesh those claws tore

Running fast, feet pounding across the ground
She could not wake up, so she fled the beast
It roars, and she tries to block out the sound
It is close behind, but she tried at least

Was it just a dream or a memory?
Where is the love that she thought she could see?


yes this is a sonnet, so anyway comment your theories on who it's about.

5 comments:

  1. Is this about the dream you had last night? I have theories, but I don't want to offend.

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  2. Nevermind, I figured it out. :) I'll be waiting for my cookie.

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  3. shutup, noone listen to nicki i had to practically spell the answer for her. the cookie has not yet been given, so lets hear guesses.

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  4. she's schizophrenic.
    she's a drug addict.
    she's in a coma.
    she's in an abusive relationship.

    thats all i got at the moment. the last one makes the most sense to me. but im crazy so whatever.

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  5. no, no, no, no. it's actual a very literal poem. none of that is metaphorical. and you won't get it paige. hinttt it's a reference

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